Upon the mountain top lay a pool of sparkling water
the rains came
thunder roared
life was torn asunder.
The water lay stagnant the pool muddied,
dark
until the tear
a tear
Let loose the dam,
let loose the broken debris of a life
let the waters flow
flow
Starting slow, slow, slow
building, churning
a clap of thunder reveals the turmoil
the lightning strikes!
and the trickle
the trickle builds
builds momentum
down the mountain, down
DOWN!
Into the valley, ever gaining, ever widening
filling an immense space
the space between two oceans
and two hearts
keep lettin' it out girl...good to see you back on the blogs...
ReplyDeleteThanks Grrl! :)
ReplyDeleteAahh! It is not alone the imagery, the metaphorical implication I adore here. I kept reading this on and on and on. The consolation is, the immense space is been filled.
ReplyDeleteYou are a very good writer, you know that, right? Loved it! Keep writing!!!
Beautiful, but, oh, so very sad.
ReplyDelete(By the way, I agree with Brosreview.)
wow this touched my heart. I know you can write SG but this is my fave.. SO glad to see you back writing again. I loved how you used this and referred it to life, broken hearts,
ReplyDeleteawesome
have a great weekend.. HUGS
I agree with Ajey, Judith and Inky. This is a very well-written piece Annie, or must I spell it Anney, eh?
ReplyDeleteThe connection between nature and human nature is very well established. Now, I know why Ajey kept insisting I visit your spot.
I am following you from now on! In a good sense, I mean!
-J and J
beautiful.
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