The chill of the damp earth
Oblivious as the snow gently lands and dissolves on its' surface
a gentle landing, after a gentle fall
Still, it piles up after a time,
after a time the frozen earth cannot be penetrated
Such little flakes,
such seemingly simple weight,
innocuous
yet when piled high
can crush
A pile can be fatal. It better be regularly swept away.
ReplyDeleteWell done! This is brilliant! I love the implication. Muwah!
I agree with Ajey here. A pile of problems and unsaid or unspoken or unexpressed suppressed issues can crash and burn down in an more inhumane way. This can be avoided.
ReplyDeleteA very good analogy here.
You are on a roll. Annie, have you got back your muse? Obviously yes. I am glad that you have.
Hugs and kisses,
Jennifer
says something for not letting things build up...but no matter the weight, you have the strength my sista.
ReplyDeleteI am here on recommendation by Ajey. He had warned me, "Be ready to be blown away." I know what he meant now!
ReplyDeleteSuch a simple fact. It is the emotions. Emotions bottle up and then it begins to hurt. It eats you from within. It gnaws all your happiness away and when let loose came down upon a unsuspecting individual with a crushing force.
Thank you for the comment Vittal ~ Yes it is emotions, interestingly enough I didn't set out to write about emotions but that is what came out. :)
ReplyDeletethis is fantastic.
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