You need me, reconsider you say
oh restlessly the wind blows
when your faced with eternity
Give time her due, she passes
in nursery rhymes
in troubled timesshe passes away
I remember that day,
the day we first kissed
Fire fell from the sky
and I viewed it from a distance
through rainbow lenses
There is such a delicate although direct sense of loss here. Nicely written, Strawberry Girl, nice indeed. I hope all is well for you and yours.
ReplyDeleteI love the phrase "rainbow lenses". You will find them lenses again. It is just a matter of time. I hope and know all will be well soon!
ReplyDeleteThank you Judith I hope to find all well for you and yours as well.
ReplyDeleteAjey, thank you. I'm sure things will get better soon, it is only a matter of time.
Very powerful, every line packs a punch. Incredible poetry.
ReplyDeleteuse of rainbow lenses was good in a weird way!!yup takes a lot of time to move on but then also some of the memories still remain with us.tracing our footsteps again to find a piece that once connected with that memory!!i think you will someday find your rainbow lenses!!keep writing!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Tira.
ReplyDeleteHeavealie, thanks for stopping by and commenting.
:)