As I lie, the shackles fall, these humble walls can't hold me
Sacred memories, sainted sites, blessed past enfold me
Stars glitter in the night
Lilting melodious wind in flight
Take me up among the leaves
Share my soul among the trees
My breath is part of you
Ancient drops you know me, right
Don't leave me to these shackles
Leave me to lie here
Grounded
Sacred memories, sainted sites, blessed past enfold me
Stars glitter in the night
Lilting melodious wind in flight
Take me up among the leaves
Share my soul among the trees
My breath is part of you
Ancient drops you know me, right
Don't leave me to these shackles
Leave me to lie here
Grounded
What I love with this piece is that there are dual meanings I deduce from this. As always, you manage to convey a deep and profound and relatable message using nature as your biggest muse (which I know it is) and also as your canvas of metaphors. Well done!!! Keep writing!!!
ReplyDelete"As I lie, the shackles fall, these humble walls can't hold me"
ReplyDeleteThe beginning itself was so much about free feeling that every line that followed just uplifted the spirits .. Loved this :)