Numb
Numb
Numb, another one
No really, another one?
It has just begun, just begun, it cannot really be another one.
NO, NO, NO
It cannot happen, I will not let it, what can work,
can anything work to stop this? Can it?
I will try It , anything, anything
Bring me herbs, doctors, voodoo magic
Stop, stop, stop this please
Please
Please
Naïve girl
This one
This one
This
Can still happen
Even if
You are numb
*This piece is connected with this piece
http://creativelywritten.blogspot.com/2009/06/missing-angel.html
i have a poem similar to this. its such a crummy feeling.
ReplyDeleteThanks Loren, I have to admit... I read many of your poems and thought, geez this girl is thinking many similar thoughts to my own... how surreal. :)
ReplyDeleteWOW !!! you are full of happy surprises lol. But then , I am not , because you are so talented..
ReplyDeleteIt kind of reminded me of a song by
pink Floyd.. called comfortably numb
There is no pain you are receding
A distant ship, smoke on the horizon.
You are only coming through in waves.
Your lips move but I can't hear what you're saying.
When I was a child
I caught a fleeting glimpse
Out of the corner of my eye.
I turned to look but it was gone
I cannot put my finger on it now
The child is grown,
The dream is gone.
I have become comfortably numb.
Honey, I second Inky on this one! Muwah!
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